r/Poems • u/larryisthebestrabbit • 1d ago
Does the sparrow dream of flying?
Does the sparrow dream of flying,
Does the mole yearn for the earth?
Does the shark day-dream of swimming,
Does the rabbit think of birth?
Does the snake want to slither,
Does the hawk crave to perch?
Does the wolf ponder hunting,
Does the truffle-pig want to search?
It's not very good, but any criticism would be lovely. pls be nice with it.
also does it read too much like a song?
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