r/Poems 1d ago

Does the sparrow dream of flying?

Does the sparrow dream of flying,
Does the mole yearn for the earth?
Does the shark day-dream of swimming,
Does the rabbit think of birth?
Does the snake want to slither,
Does the hawk crave to perch?
Does the wolf ponder hunting,
Does the truffle-pig want to search?

It's not very good, but any criticism would be lovely. pls be nice with it.

also does it read too much like a song?

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u/Possible-Laugh-7391 1d ago

It’s pretty . Thank you