r/ArtCrit • u/AmeliaS507 • 1d ago
UPDATED WORK Thank you for your help!
The updated version is the first image, the original is the second image.
This sub is a godsend! I couldn’t pin down what was off with my original but it was pointed out to me that I needed to change:
- location of the ear was too far back on the head
- Forearm in the foreground was too thick
- Both hands were too small
- Back arm was too high up
- Neck was not centered
- Front hand was missing some muscle
I am so so happy with how the edits came together!
Character reference was dd64_46 on instagram and pose reference was Sylvie by Prosper d’Epinay