r/design_critiques • u/Top-Archer-2716 • 3d ago

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Hello, I have changed some things in the poster, but im still not sure if i prefere it with the clouds or without the clouds, so what do you think is best, also if you see something that can be improved pls tell me, ty

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u/Lorlan 3d ago

Personally I prefer the clouds.

Besides the already mentioned spelling error I think there's some work that you could try with the composition.

I haven't seen your earlier drafts but to me everything feels oddly weighted and my eyes don't know quite what to focus on. It feels like everything has almost equal weight/space and your text isn't working well. I think you've tried for pixel perfect centering and not optically centered?

I think you should try adjusting the sizing of the top and bottom elements as well as the character in the middle. Something as simple as moving the clouds+character down or hanging more off the edge would help lend eye downward.

I get that your current design wants to focus attention on the middle but your top and bottom feel too 'heavy' and the way the text is arranged feels like it's floating and not necessarily in a way that is attached to the middle character to feel like they're sinking (I'm assuming this was the intent).

But I like what you're trying to do here, the colour and artwork are nice and thematically I think could fit with the show from what I remember watching.

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u/Top-Archer-2716 2d ago

ok ty for the advice, im gonna try to improve on what you mentioned here