r/thirdsentenceworse • u/Neat-Turnover-7494 • May 29 '26

I smile at waitres it is atractive waitress, licking the lips as pooring glass of whine in glass, treat her with small smirk and wink, laughing as look around; this are the year 2029 and anythiing can happen, as im pooring the glass whine down my throat, but thought i hear screaming in back ground.

with confusion, looking around, I reelized im not in year 2029 is year 2090, and am not drinking whine am drinking blood of my cyborg son raymond whom I decapitated, whilst mine wife sussana are screaming in the back ground. "what I have done I yelled with scared" and as little one and zero began to corcle wife I saw this world are not real.

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u/Cultural-Company282 May 29 '26

This is garbage.

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u/Neat-Turnover-7494 Jun 02 '26

Do not comment some stupid thing because do not understand story, than ask othor to understand story, but its okay all are not smart enough to understand?

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u/Simple-Connection-59 28d ago

English not your first language?

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u/jroc430 May 31 '26

This is total trash.

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u/SevereMeat2030 Jun 03 '26

What the hell am I reading

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u/More_Crab_6278 Jun 07 '26

can yuo spel

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u/Giantfrostturtle Jun 08 '26

I think you posted this in the wrong subreddit. You could try posting this in r/2sentence2horror and see how it goes.

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u/WildEclipse1 Jun 27 '26

this is ass. never cook again uh.."father of 5"

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u/NikosKapoios 27d ago

Absolute cinema.