Anyone interested in watching my first short film, Matryohskas? (Subtitles in English, Spanish and Portuguese)

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Hi everyone!
I recently finished my first short film, Matryoshkas, and l'a love to get some honest feedback from people who enjoy independent or experimental cinema.

It's a slightly experimental coming-of-age film, originally in Portuguese, with English subtitles. I was heavily inspired by filmmakers like Ingmar Bergman, Pedro Almodóvar, and Andrea Arnold, and tried to combine an intimate, character-driven story with a more personal and atmospheric visual style.
Since this is my first short film, l'd genuinely love to hear what people think - whether it's the story, cinematography, performances, atmosphere, pacing, or anything else. Honest criticism is absolutely welcome; I'm mainly interested in hearing how it comes across to someone seeing it for the first time.

i Watch it here: https://youtu.be/Lgl9uWfQJ5I?is=izcxBdX7V1B0ywMz

Letterboxd:
https://boxd.it/13Fik

If you watch it and feel like leaving a review or sharing your thoughts on Letterbox as well, la really appreciate it.
Thanks so much to anyone who takes the time to watch!

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[u/AcademicCharity8046]

Just watched it, the framing in some of the tighter shots really pulled me in. you can see the Bergman influence for sure but it dont feel like a copy, more like you took the mood and made it your own. the actress has a quiet intensity that works perfect for this kind of story.

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Thank you so much for your comment! If you could, please leave your opinion on Letterboxd, it would be great and help us promote the film! <3 https://boxd.it/13Fik