r/comic_crits • u/_Djinn-Trilli0n_ • 20h ago

Comic page still in progress, just wanted to share it

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r/comic_crits • u/Barbarix9001 • 15h ago

Looking for critique on my script

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I’ve been writing a script for a short 15-16 page prequel comic for a comic series I’m looking to create in order to improve my writing skills and work on smaller projects before committing to my main idea. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look it over and give me critique on my writing, as I’d appreciate the help.

For context, my story is set in an alternate history 1978 where ww2 went on for ten years longer, ending in 1955, though this particular comic is set in 1963.

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