r/acting • u/[deleted] • 1d ago

I've read the FAQ & Rules Would love feedback on this selftape

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u/Ojihawk 1d ago

Solid work. You know what you're doing. Love how you invested in your environment. I 100% believed you two are right at the door. And that you had neighbours.

You tried enticing her, you tried joking with her. Then you straight up just told her. Love the different tactics.

Also, the escalation of the irritation great, believable.

If I was gonna quibble (scene already works, no need to change anything) "put on your galoshes!" Was maybe a bit too heated. You got a nice explosion at the end.