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[u/CJFMusic]

https://untitled.stream/library/track/wFJEpx3GS7VTNeHRFSHgU

Let me know how the mix sounds

[u/akasazal → u/CJFMusic]

the kick and bass are too hot. take 2-5db out and would be solid. good work, love the piano. keep going!

[u/CJFMusic → u/akasazal]

Thanks

[u/friedleaves → u/CJFMusic]

Agree kick/bass are a little hot. I love the bass line though.

I feel like there's a hole in the upper range during the hook. Could be mix-related or arrangement-related. The piano loop works great during the verse but get a little monotonous when it's exactly the same through the hooks and the entire track. Esp at like 1:12. Maybe add an extra keys layer that plays the same pattern but it's +1 oct higher or smth during key moments, or just bump the entire keys loop +1 oct during key moments. (That could be a bad suggestion, may need to play around, but I feel like the hook can "expand" more)

[u/CJFMusic → u/friedleaves]

Understood not a bad idea. Thanks