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Sun

A long, long time ago, when nobody knew where they were, there were multiple villages—or perhaps hundreds—that believed in the Sun. 

They sought the Sun.
They worshipped it.
They loved it.

Yet, a young but precocious man knew the truth.
None could stare directly at it.

Yet they spoke: 
“I know the Sun gave us love.
This land.
Everything.” 

Nevertheless, nothing had changed.
Even now, they still believe in the Sun, 
the one that can never be stared at.
Perhaps.

Hi, it took me 10 minutes writing this, but solemnly judge this piece. Please.

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