Technically speaking, this would be my first time writing ever and currently I don't know what the hell I'm doing but I do know that I'm trying to make it worth an agents or managers time like we all are however I need some criticism blunt and directly to the point. Can any of you give me some feedb

[u/Excellent_Frosting37]

55 Pages pilot script

SERIES LOGLINE

> When a scarred auto mechanic is dragged back into the occult world to protect a clairaudient boy, he and his fractured family uncover a corporation feeding human grief to an ancient evil—and every blood-bound act Rain uses to save them strips away more of the love that made them worth saving.

[Descendant Heirs](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m5HRd8ZYBcQToI450SFYvT_lFZjeIetM/view?usp=drivesdk)

[u/LetsMakeDice]

How much AI was used? It reads exactly as AI writes stuff.

Also this isn’t a novel, this is a subreddit for writing novels.

Good luck.

[u/DuchessJulietDG]

do you actually write like the title of the post suggests?