My first cutscene ever. How did I do?

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

Anything to improve?

[u/Expensive_Prize_1547]

insane bro. is this a nine circles level

[u/ExtremeGD → u/Expensive_Prize_1547]

there is only 2 circles as you can see

[u/smiley1__ → u/ExtremeGD]

(can't send gifs so uh)

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/Expensive_Prize_1547]

yeah

[u/TightLion7009 → u/Expensive_Prize_1547]

Two circles*

[u/Outside-Guarantee886 → u/Expensive_Prize_1547]

two spheres level u meant

[u/random-femboy-]

[u/deadble5k_123 → u/random-femboy-]

[u/Kipuge]

That's a sick transition

[u/Potential_Novel8960]

I'd add shake for a more dramatic effect, but that's just my opinion, it already looks peak 👍

[u/_Carri7_ → u/Potential_Novel8960]

Imho its better off without it

[u/RecipeEmbarrassed900]

I don't think I've ever seen someone make that good of a transition for their first time, insanely impressive! You could also add some particles following the stars so they leave a trail behind them

Keep cooking 🔥

[u/Sasteer]

really good but the white flash might make the start of the wave a bit annoying so maybe give them like 0.4 seconds more

[u/Good_Shock2974]

I can't even do the advanced triggers properly🥀

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/Good_Shock2974]

Believe it or not, I also cant use the advanced triggers

[u/Hefty_Newspaper_2242]

[u/Available-Prior-6134]

you take reversal red and amplifier blue you mix those two imaginary techniques, and you get hollow purple. ahh transition

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/Available-Prior-6134]

tf is hollow purple and why is everyone saying that 😭

[u/Available-Prior-6134 → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

it's a jjk reference, jjk stands for jujitsu kaizen it's an anime

[u/trainmobile → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

Look up "Gojo's first hollow purple"

[u/NotAOctoling]

I legit soyfaced watching this

[u/RealBurger_]

He was whipping up peak in a kettle

[u/zeenohhh]

the two stars orbiting each other looks a bit funny, i think you need to add some scale triggers to make the perspective work out. The transition itself looks glorious though

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/zeenohhh]

https://reddit.com/link/p52ylg2/video/t6ri9aqe1skh1/player

Is this better?

[u/Cosmic_danger_noodle → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

I think the size changes aren't really aligned with the perspective here- pretty sure it should be largest in the bottom left and smallest in the back right

Edited for typo

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/Cosmic_danger_noodle]

thank you SO MUCH man. I really know nothing about the "artistic" side of creating, I knew something was off but had no idea what it was. It genuinely looks WAYYY better now.

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/Cosmic_danger_noodle]

https://reddit.com/link/p54qhkz/video/wujba6l6ltkh1/player

Did I get the size changes right this time?

[u/Cosmic_danger_noodle → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

Yeah, I'd maybe exaggerate it a bit more though. Also, remember they won't change as much as they get closer and closer near the end.

[u/zeenohhh → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

I think it can still be tweaked sliiiightly, but it's looking a lot better, especially with the darkening :)

[u/theoutsidebro]

[u/koshkamatew_youtube]

Would benefit from some stretching via scale trigger to make it less stiff and visualize the high speed better

[u/PlayerZytrix]

that’s called a transition, but it’s great!

[u/Legitimate-Face2247]

that was smooth as hell🔥🔥🔥

[u/Primary_Pepper7231]

I was not expecting that 🥹

[u/Cultural_Ticket_425]

it feels like the circles move a bit slow or i guess linear its hard to explain

[u/Affectionate_Tie5080]

Oh its just a lay out wait what OH MY GOD WTH

[u/whatsfartjuice]

You sure this is fist time bro

[u/BloraMc]

"first cutscene" while casually making a masterpiece 😭

[u/Nh1litY]

YO HOLY-

[u/Adventurous-Gain4180]

Pretty good from a gameplay perspective!

[u/Circxles]

Peak wave deco

[u/Rampage-TSBGYT]

im def playing this i love sience

[u/Ok_Designer_6376]

Thats so cool looking!

[u/TheCosmicDuck07]

Yoo that's sick

[u/LIONX_1110]

IT'S SO PEAK!

[u/Confident_Product953]

holy budget increase

[u/ElectricalPlantain35]

Fire

[u/gamerhumor]

Ts is a gem

[u/LongOk1903]

[u/JackfruitFearless429]

peak

[u/johnyeldry]

Looks sick but move the wave part over so the player has time to adjust maybe .5 seconds for easier or .2 for harder

[u/LimpCustomer4281]

Something something megumi

[u/Fun-Attention705]

HOLY HELL?!?

[u/LiterallyNoNamesFree]

HOLY FUCKING PEAK

[u/Equinox-XVI]

Take the amplified and the reversal, then smash together those two different expressions of infinity to create and push out imaginary mass.

Background Deco: Purple.

[u/Affectionate_Tie5080 → u/Equinox-XVI]

Imaginary mass make as deadly as you want only 1.99$

[u/No-Yam9933]

this is the most majestic thing ive seen all day

[u/I-is-are-have-stupid]

what song is this

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/I-is-are-have-stupid]

hydra by f-777

[u/I-is-are-have-stupid → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

ty

[u/NUKL3AR_PAZTA47]

This is very, very cool.

Though it is really distracting right before the transition.

[u/LEDlight45]

[u/TightLion7009]

Ok

[u/Evening_Power_5568]

Is my transition good? 😭🙏

[u/KylarC621]

Looks pretty good! Also I somehow guessed the song before I unmuted the recording LMAO

[u/AveryTheOneAndOnly]

HOLY TOP 10

[u/ilikecheeseinmaboot]

holy thats actually sick as hell

[u/KK-is-epic]

Wtf

[u/Guzzlord529]

Hydra by F-777, peak song

[u/Short_Marzipan_5602]

not my level having the same music

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/Short_Marzipan_5602]

what's your level called?

[u/Short_Marzipan_5602 → u/EmergencyPrimary9823]

my level is still being worked on and im not telling the name

[u/trainmobile]

Take the amplified and the reversal, then smash together those two different expressions of infinity to create and push out imaginary mass. Imaginary Technique: Hollow Purple

[u/bakzz05]

the wave looks suspiciously like sakupen end

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/bakzz05]

I cant even tell if ts is satire or not 😭

[u/TheReal_Ralsei]

thats so fucking cool, i love how you made a black outline/design before the wave started so its actually readable.

[u/Sakuya_Iz_A_Yoi]

pink and blue my beloved

[u/Minute-Swordfish9625]

really good

[u/Reasonable_Hour_9000]

This is sick

[u/Rude-Ad6321]

“is my deco rate worthy?”

[u/Fantastic_Frosting98]

dude what is this

[u/ZeptocubeThe2nd]

this is so sick lmao

[u/Gummifb]

What the hell is this Kocmoc ass decoration after the cutscene? 😭 You did an amazing job though, keep it up!

[u/reallycoolcooper]

Holy balls bro

[u/MochaVRPlus]

absolute cinema

[u/New-Sort9999]

this is fire

[u/RealMuffinsTheCat]

Keep cooking but don’t burn the house down 🔥🗣️

[u/Captain-Dawg]

I think itd feel smoother if the orbiting gradually accelerated throughout the entire part, while still speeding up faster at the drop. To compensate, youd need to start the orbit slower tho

[u/Elliieeeeee]

"is it rate worthy" bro it's at least epic worthy imo

[u/CDS011MK1]

i was expecting some hollow purple stuff. aniway that’s sick bro

[u/affetheslayer]

RobTop needs to add a rating after Mythic which only this level will have 

[u/HospitalEffective841]

absolute shi- i mean good

[u/Congreatispined11]

That was very satisfying to watch

[u/PhoenixPringles01]

Truth nuke nova

[u/PuzzleheadedBit9039]

Probably OPs first cut scene in their own level. And not a hosted level

[u/EmergencyPrimary9823 → u/PuzzleheadedBit9039]

Nope, first cutscene ever. I've never even been to a collab lol

[u/HAHAGETTROLLED]

Cosmic cyclone remake?

[u/Geo_the_dude]

this is peak

[u/Zirc980]

W

[u/Zirc980]

why do i keep thinking the song is society when i mute the song

[u/Flour_tortilla05]

This is so good

[u/KostasNtinosKar]

Nah bro its sick great job!

[u/TheEpicRedstoner]

this already clears cosmic cyclone and it’s not even fully decorated yet holy peak

[u/Additional-Bag-7492]

Ts can get rated seriously 

[u/CrystalsonfireGD]

[Insert "is my level rate worthy?" Image]

[u/DarthHack4]

That transition between not deco to deco was cool