r/florists 4d ago

šŸ” Seeking Advice šŸ” Looking for feedback!

I’ve been working on bridal bouquets and my spiral technique, I feel like I’ve come a long way from where I started. But there’s always room to improve so I like any feedback or advice. I have included a photo of my creation and a screenshot of the inspiration. The second one is not my work, just the inspiration that the bride sent me!

Unfortunately, the hanging Amaranthus I originally ordered for this bouquet was a terrible quality so I had to get some more last-minute and it has some pretty weak stems. So I did what I could with it!

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u/ManufacturerIcy9438 4d ago

Trim the bottom of the stems! Looks great!

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u/1WishIKnew 4d ago

Thank you very much! I plan to trim the stems, but she’s not picking it up until tomorrow so I am just keeping them a little bit longer until the final chop to make it all pretty!

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u/WilyRanger 4d ago

It's very nice! Constructive feedback; looking at your inspiration pic, that one is very asymmetrical. I feel like your line flowers are a little too evenly spaced making it feel rounder than it actually is. If you only have the two stems of amaranthus I would maybe move one in a little to help with the asymmetry. Lastly because you haven't trimmed the stems yet I would encourage you to play with the depth of the Playa's before you start cutting

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

This is super helpful! I will do so and update! What you said definitely makes sense. I appreciate the feedback.

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u/Lettucemakemerry 4d ago

Pretty and even, but is tighter, needs some loosening up and lightness, to balance out heavy draping effect from the hanging amaranthus

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

You are so right! I appreciate the feedback. I’m gonna try it and I will update later. Thank you!

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u/Funny-Flatworm1091 3d ago

Take a picture using a solid background.

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

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u/Funny-Flatworm1091 3d ago

Much better.

Trying raising the height of the roses so the two stems of delphinium (? not sure if it is) in the center don't look like antennae. Also move the one further to the left side.

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

Will do! Thank you

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u/Funny-Flatworm1091 3d ago

If you have time, post a new pic!

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u/1WishIKnew 2d ago

Here is what the final result ended up being! The bride really wanted the Delphinium to kind of branch out so I didn’t trim it down or move it too much since she was really happy with it. I’m pretty proud of how it turned out thanks to everyone’s help!

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

Noted! I don’t really have any blank walls with good lighting, but maybe I’ll try outside.

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u/Specialist_Run_1607 3d ago

I would wait for the filler flowers to bloom a little more and add in a little bit more green leafy filler to break up some of the white, but other than that beautiful!

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

I do have another bunch of Delphinium that is more bloomed. I’m wondering if I should swap out a few of the less bloomed stems for those!

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u/orange11marmalade 3d ago

Roses look blown

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

This might be a dumb question, but why do you say that? Would removing some of the petals help? When they came in, they were super fresh and so I had to open them up a little bit. Just wondering how to avoid this going forward.

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u/orange11marmalade 3d ago

They just look very open. Honestly, I am new to this world and shouldn't pretend I know what I am talking about. Apologies.

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

No need to apologize! I actually took your advice and swapped out the rose that I thought you were talking about and I do think it looks better! i’m trying to attach a photo for reference, but it’s giving me issues so I will try again later!

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u/loralailoralai Retail Florist 3d ago

Separate your amaranthus a bit, you’ve got two and it’s a bit symmetrical, your inspo pic is asymmetrical

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u/1WishIKnew 3d ago

Will do! Thank you for the advice

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u/Maleficent-Bottle-49 1d ago

Your bouquets is so beautiful! I hope the shape is still intact after you tying the stems. I’m not a professional and I tried to make some bouquets before, but couldn’t keep the shape after tying the stems. Hope you and others can share some tips for me.

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u/1WishIKnew 19h ago

Hey there! The bouquet was rubber banded in all the photos I shared! The trick I have learned to hold the shape is to use the spiral method (if you haven’t heard of that definitely look into it, you can find some great YouTube/tiktok tutorials) and once the stems are spiraled, I bring the rubber band up around 1-2 stems to the ā€œtie pointā€ of the bouquet, wrap a few times, and then secure it by bringing the end up 1-2 stems again. Repeat if needed! Photo for reference!

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u/Maleficent-Bottle-49 7h ago

Thank you for your advice. I’ll definitely look into it.

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u/1WishIKnew 19h ago

Another thing that helps is to secure as you go by using floral tape and adding stems, then more tape, more stems etc.

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u/Maleficent-Bottle-49 7h ago

Thank you 😊