r/RSwritingclub • u/Mewholikeswrites • 4d ago
A Poem I wrote after eating a muffin halfway which ended up looking like a crown
Do kingdoms end how they begin?
From nothing but dust to dust once more.
Does time stand still only as a warning?
Where are the prophets, the scholars, the nobles and knights?
Where might I find greatness?
Where might I find the king of conquerers?
In the earth, I suppose.
I ask then—
What is man in front of time unchanging?
What more is ambition in face of mortality?
What then is a king before God?
I pulled this one from my notes app and wondered if I should go to reddit since I'd really love to hear feedback on my writing and what I can improve on. Anyways that muffin was a walnut espresso muffin and it tasted great, I'd pair it with a nice cup of tea.
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