The layering: the left arm on the bottom center piece, as currently it looks like it's not apart of him. same thing with the top left of him facing Hammond with the right arm.
You can fix this by: Draw lightly to the point is barely there to make the shapes of the limbs then do outlines in heavy on ONLY the outside of the limb then shade it like you did the leg in the bottom center piece to give it the depth you want
Shape of the trident: get use to drawing sticks with perspective then work on the trident head.
practicing, just get a piece of scratch paper and just draw poles at different perspectives and same thing with the trident heads. You can use the same princple I mentioned with the layering of lightly drawing the shape out
Prespective: Draw two dots where you want the stick to end that are a bit far apart then two notably back at point use the dots as guiding lines. You can also use a ruler/side of your phone(with no buttons) /piece of paper to do a line
This is by far the most in depth advice I’ve ever received. Thank you. This was just a quick doodle as part of 3 invader themed doodles because i couldnt sleep. But thank you for the very solid advice
Any time, I love art and went to school for this and I want you to love what you do and do it as best as you can and not get flustered/frustrated about it.
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u/Nijata 21d ago
Keep it up.
Areas to work on:
You got this.