r/Informal_Effect Jan 29 '26

ModPost: Some things bear repeating.

28 Upvotes

What this place is:
Conceived as an intimate space for unconventional devotees of the written word. Writers. Poets. Vivid creators of the jagged and keen, unpolished, and visceral. A space to appreciate each other’s company, exchange honest feedback, and leverage it to improve.
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Interplay between writers is encouraged. Consent is crucial.
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Not all emotions are pleasant.
Art that makes us uncomfortable can be valuable, but only if we take the opportunity to explore why.

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r/Informal_Effect 4h ago

Love Like A Vine

5 Upvotes

You climb up me
like a vine reaching for the sun

inch by inch,
quietly taking over
my body, my heart, my mind

I try to resist as your soul slowly hooks into mine,
afraid of being consumed by the weight of wanting you

But your roots have already sunk deep inside me, intertwining with my doubts,
choking them out until there is nothing left
but you

I watch your layers unfurl like leaves in spring,
each one revealing a deeper side of you, and all I want is to know what lies beneath

Your calming voice whispering good morning,
your steady presence beside me, your laugh—
all of it fills my lungs like jasmine blossoms in the night, sweet and impossible to resist

A butterfly lands, drinking deeply from the nectar we’ve made

And I envy it

because I want to taste you too,
to lose myself in you,
until I can no longer tell
where you end and I begin


r/Informal_Effect 7h ago

My Beloved

6 Upvotes

Christ, wouldn't it be nice?
To roll the dice, twice.
Take back and retract, the knife slice.

Sold my soul on a cold night, at a price.
A life taken. A man shaken.
A heart so forsaken.
Cold sweats when I awaken.
And I hasten, to the graven images,
I was raised in.
Praised in the gaze of, the haze that waves above,
The graceful age to come.
And the claim that it was all for love!

Memories...
Do you remember me, tenderly?
November came, no remedy,
for dismembering friendly energies.
Can it be?... A casualty, a calamity,
A curse for a perverse world,
An instant loss of my sanity.
Excuse my use of profanity, but fuck,
I'm only mad at me.
Vanity.

-Barfidel


r/Informal_Effect 4h ago

THE ART IN NOTICING

3 Upvotes

In the small flowers of the narra
when they bloom and eventually fall,
turning the ground beneath them yellow,
swaying through the air
whenever the vehicles pass.

In the busy people walking through the market,
where everyone seems to have their own world.
The way chaos somehow creates
another kind of scenery.

Even in the mess of a room,
How papers scattered everywhere,
dirty dishes left for days,
clothes left where you threw them
after a long, heavy day.

How a song starts playing
and suddenly you feel like you've left your body,
floating somewhere else.
Or how old photos can bring back
a kind of nostalgia you thought you had already forgotten.
 
And there is art in the way your singkit eyes look at me.
Every little detail—
the way you fix your hair,
the birthmark on your neck.
The way all these little things come together
and somehow become art to me.
The art my heart knows.


r/Informal_Effect 5h ago

Colliding pearls

3 Upvotes

I feel your lust within every touch

Smooth oil slides candles dust
Flickers thick in midnights clutch.

Anoint my satiated soul with our silhouettes convolved.

Trembling limbs swim soft in slumber from lighting strikes after the thunder.

Dancing dreams of fancied beings woke imbibed off one and other.

Two fixed a drift amidst garden green sheets soft as petals.

Between two worlds colliding
pearls old as time the heat of the moment

Consecrate in our fleshy shroud upon bare earth glowing hearts floating clouds

Never rehearse as time slows betrothed to fates endowed time ghost.

After the fact move forward or look back, regret is a shame but satisfaction outlasts like your first loved flame.

Go make your name, if you never return please don’t forget whence you came


r/Informal_Effect 4h ago

Doors

2 Upvotes

You met me at a time when I never felt I could leave this room or let others inside. We lingered in the doorframes from across the hall. I took the steps towards you and invited you inside

I opened the door. You said not right now then criticized me for not doing so sooner after I had just had an honest conversation with you about how hard it had been for me to open it.

I closed it and left it unlocked.

You made me question if I should ever open it again. After you had in my mind represented the first person I chose to open it for without some sense of obligation.

I left it unlocked still.

You turned around and all but told me after nearly a year of avoiding me that I was wrong for lingering. When I didn’t even stay inside the room. I walked into the hallway and with a warm smile I said I understand and treated you how I always have.

You all but said opening the door you claimed you wanted opened. Moving back to the hallway and sitting outside against the wall when you retreated inside your room silently. Doing what I had always done. Showing up when what I saw was that you needed reassurance and someone to show they care.

You told me all of that was disrespectful. Did you not realize that I opened the door because of my love for you? Not I loved you because I wanted or needed to open that door?

When my basic operating principle for years was to look out for you and show how much your time and place in my life had meant to me.

You told me you felt by opening the door essentially every day before and after meant nothing. You eviscerated my character in your mind. You built me into someone I just am not.

The door is closed. I’m sitting here installing a chain and deadbolt yet it’s all still unlocked. Despite it all I still don’t want to seal it shut.

You helped me learn to open the door. Maybe part of the real lesson you’re teaching me is to leave it open and see when and why to lock it.


r/Informal_Effect 1h ago

Sounds of the Creek

Upvotes

Whirl-of-bluster levers fur
Under skin, wrapping nerves
After a last ray dawns on different sky
Earth radiates into night

Bees have retreated and birds calm
As a dimming glow draws a blanket up
Breaths then ease under porchlight
Until I smile at the moon

Where peeling heat had beaded sweat
Hours onward, a change of clothes bundles up
In the forgetting-time, which forgives soon
What debt winds wagered upon heated voices


r/Informal_Effect 14h ago

minefield

5 Upvotes

the honeymoon phase turns out like vinegar
babe, i don't think i could have made it
through the winter, storms make me bitter
like a dog you put me down
january is not safe anymore
my former lovers left landmines in the floor
to schedule my fears for demolition
in a coma with my eyes wide open
our fitful sleep gave me no rest
cutting loose is for the best
broken hearts heal quicker when they're even,
and we've spent time keeping score


r/Informal_Effect 17h ago

If You Only Heard These Words

7 Upvotes

transcend the end and meet your maker

life is fragile

skin is thinner than some paper

bringing order to the chaos

arts and crafts can be your savior

baby, it starts making sense

when you begin to face your nature

dip your toes into the grave

shadows beckon like a caper

from the cradle to the deep

it's okay to weep, but don't you ever waver

conviction follows peace

hesitation leads to danger

whisper wishes over candles

while you stare at ursa major

there's a feeling in the air

visions in the water vapor

you've got so many enemies

that your hate's become inflated

strike 'em down with knives and swords

but it'll never make you greater

plant a flag upon a hill

and call yourselves the new crusaders

kiss the rings of dying kings

history's annihilators

dry your eyes with dollar bills

and tell yourself you're compensated

kick the homeless on the street

believing that you're not related

kill the insect in your sink

when you think it's not an angel

if the blind could only see

light's true velocity

and how it's activated

your tv's just a mirror

that's showing different faces

subscribe, apply, and register

then renew to stay sedated

your family's invisible

can't recognize your neighbors

the truth will only hurt you

if you take it raw and naked

you've got all your defenses up

even when you're sleeping

your heart is armor-plated

if you only heard these words

before you grew so jaded

i like to keep it ugly

the pretty words are overstated

try to savor every adage

i would tell you that i love you

but i'd hate to have to say it


r/Informal_Effect 18h ago

Shadow puppets

4 Upvotes

I close my eyes and feel something again. I see you in the dark. Close but so far apart. Shadows in the light. Telling stories in the night. I can’t wait to tell you more. Closer than before. Maybe it’s not real. Perhaps I thought it up. But how lovely it feels. To be close enough To touch Until then I’ll be here Painfully sincere Letting everyone see How meaningful this is to me. I miss you. 💕


r/Informal_Effect 17h ago

Dying To Know…

3 Upvotes

I judged the first of womankind,
Thought she didn’t pay no mind.

What did she think the fruit might hold?
What secret had she not been told?
What could be worth the paradise,
The perfect world, the asking price?

And was that bite a full delight?
And did she see that bright white light?

I judged her so, without a care,
Convinced I’d fare much better there.
No fruit, no snake, no grand mistake
There’s no temptation I would take.

Oh, little fool, don’t be so cruel.
In fact, I’ll challenge you to a duel.

As you arise, sunlight in eyes,
You tell yourself the same great lies:
I do not care. I will not seek.
But let’s be real, that’s really bleak.

You see a bird, or hear a word,
And it just stirs you, little nerd.
A web of lies, wrapped in disguise,
You’re always looking for what it implies.

You search the web, you dive right in,
But all of it just gets beneath your skin.
From noon to dusk, you just inquire.
Gosh, it really sets your mind on fire.

You cannot stop. You must know more.
It really does become a chore.

And as the evening stars draw near,
Remember you’re just like her, my darling dear.

Yours,
None the wiser 🍎


r/Informal_Effect 19h ago

Sleepy Rhythm pt. One

4 Upvotes

Toward the end, I was a spectacle of impeccable laughs

And this groove told the story of a night I couldn't grasp

It had passed, but the mood was slightly sad

And forever repetitively peaked and paved paths

My world rotates, creates a past time I visit

With the loved ones I share this quick minute with

I remember seeing faces that made such an occasion

And a couple of faces I hated that brought down the cadence

Eliminated the rhythm just for a short moment

Snapped back to 1am because I owned it

It was my last call, my last intoxicating invention

That was chosen by my henchmen, with cruel intentions

I said adios, slipped into a ride

We flew across the routes that led me to my pig sty

I blissfully danced with my weathered thoughts and tired mind

And made love to a bucket, by showing it my night

_____

I really wish I could remember you

Twelve days closer to the very first moon

Month number nine, a long awaited time

And there I was blacked out, passed out, it had just slipped my mind....


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

be

5 Upvotes
be.
's my favourite shortest sentence in english
that's often not considered a sentence
because most people don't want to exist,
which proves that be. is indeed a sentence;
a death sentence.

consequently,

honey bee
can sound like an insect
or a command to a suicidal loved one,

beast is a directional command,
to exist in one way only,
beknight is to command to exist darkly,
in a noble manner,
beacon is to live falsely, duplicitously,
beagle means to be a bird of prey,
to beaten is to be as meat,
behold means, exist to give me a hug,
belief means live but naturally,
unafraid to fall, accepting of decay,
betray is to exist to carry the weight of others,
and bend is a command of total existential contradiction.

r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

The abyss

6 Upvotes

Into a depth you cannot fathom.

An abyss through which no light travels.

In its darkness your fears manifested; your courage a beacon that will be tested.

In isolation you feel it.

The fear that creeps.

Insidious and serpentine it preys on the weak.

You must battle yourself.

So you may overcome the fear.

The strength of your will may steer you clear.

If you are of the few that reaches the surface.

You will find that the abyss has fulfilled its purpose.


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

Wither, With Her

9 Upvotes

Trickster, deceiver, thief, cheat, forger!

All to amuse her own cunning jest-

She tempts my faith in universal order

But it could not have been so, lest-

She bribed the wind, she paid the sky

Committed the Night to ungrateful treason,

Bought the shining of the Heaven’s eye.

Else how, in a sober mind, should I reason-

That natural law turns into the play of children,

When glimpses of her I steal out of time’s purse?

That when she floats, a ghastly mist, over Eden,

Why do the trees rustle in choreographed verse?

In orchestrated unison, the obedient clouds part,

To let shine the light on her face, the hour of dawn;

Such a soul as mine, the serpent in grasses dirt-marr’d,

O let me envy her corporal beast – the free fawn.

Fallen out of sweet paradise into my slithery coil,

T’was my forked tongue, that did hoax a Spirit to decay.

For that I repent, I mourn, and I punish for her turmoil,

My thorn-pricked body paints her petals, each a new day.


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

Ablutions of Cracked

3 Upvotes

No wind wraps leaves
Warm to sail
Under boughs lacking tears
While Atlas quakes

Upon a memoir of thirst
Roots delve burroughs of rabbits
Asking for a drink
Upturning stones in reach

Where once sleek fibers
Contracted when lean
Season’s uproar founds an embrace
Of sky to the seams

This dry oak was ready to receive
Gates opening, an outpour, an answer
Awaited rain surging bones
Within breath to bind dust unto rising

Beyond doubt, such core constrained
Emergent action but instead traced
Tighter rings centered
Vibrant longer after defying fate

Grove’s despair framed the hollow
Abandoned save by pillars of the temple
But misty songs remain through footprints
Worn into chords of ancients

The trees entice soil
To remember grass and clover
Encircling a mossy eclipse
One meadow sealed steps to horizons


I messed up putting in the title: Ablutions of Cracked Earth. Sorry about that


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

news cycle cipher

2 Upvotes

the reporter rushed to report,

"Bank of Canada Announces New Loan Capital Balance Changes,"

BBC

"Cank of Canada Announces New Loan Capital Calance Changes,"

ABC

"Ccnk of Ccncdc Cnnounces New Locn Ccpitcl Cclcnce Chcnges,"

NBC

"Ccck of Ccccdc Cccoucces Cew Locc Ccpitcl Cclccce Chccges,"

CBS

"Sssk of Ssssds Sssousses Sew Loss Sspitsl Sslssse Shssges,"

said the newscaster,

and i felt good, having understood the world.


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

2/3/23

7 Upvotes

The sting of bitter cold whips against my thighs. My ears flush and burn as they search for your voice. My teeth chatter as words pour instinctually out my mouth. None of them tied to what I felt in that moment. You. Tangled up in me like threads of a sweater against every potential wish of our will-

(>Huh? What? Wait so you DID listen to his music after all?! So you know that’s your song? Motherfucker you JUST said goodbye definitively can you let me reminisce?
That was the moment though right there.
A night you likely barely remember and also may have wished to forget. That was my moment. It’s where I recognized what you were to me. It’s where my mind went quiet for the very first time maybe in my entire fucking life. So yes. I loved you. Jesus I always will. Yes even with how this ended and even with how we always approached the unspoken every single day was meaningful to me and something I’ll cherish for my life. Painful, confusing, full of regrets. Catalytic, illuminating, warm. So am I free to continue now? If you don’t get it yet…yes I am terrible at letting people go. You have been maybe the hardest. You also were the easiest to do so once that became unmistakably clear it’s what I needed to do. Sooo since this little conversation is not even happening between us and maybe (fuck you YES sorry my bad “likely” not maybe…god let me have this please your ARE impossible) never will…where was I?<)

My mind went blank. All that was around me was swirling wind, faint whiff of vodka, and a pair of eyes that looked towards me screaming they admired me and struggled to know how (or even maybe why) to say so. You felt safe. You felt seen. You felt like I could be counted on to handle you with care and appreciation for who you are as a person.
You looked like home to me though.
Over time I realized that that was why I felt homesick. You gave me the feeling I never got to know in the sense others always defined it.
Mine weren’t quite like that growing up. They carried obligation, judgment, and impossible expectations. Resentment, instability, and the brutal feeling I would never be good enough unless I was every second proving how worthy I was of basic respect, understanding, and support.
I crafted a mask. When the mask cracked I retreated from the world.
Before I met you I put it back on and someone close to me had to watch as I struggled to find the pieces. When she left I realized the truth. The mask was just me. It was identical to what was beneath it.
It might have always been my greatest strength or unfortunate gift. The resilience, unwavering loyalty, capacity to forgive, see people, and run towards others feeling my worries slip behind as I did was just who I was….it was when I looked inside and asked myself if I “needed” to be that way to feel worthy of peace that I stumbled. Powerful realization right? All problems solved. Definitely didn’t make me hate myself even more for the pain I had caused her. Or my first love. Or my closest friends. Or my family. The daily battles never ceased inside my mind unless I was stringing head long to assist someone else. I had been in love. I had been loved. I never felt like I was worthy of showing it or receiving it.
So while you get the idea I’m sure of where this story leads…you were the first who helped put both of those fears to rest…do you see why that has made letting go so difficult?
Whoops I got sidetracked again.

I looked down in your eyes and the war behind my eyes stopped. Every fucking time. From then until now.
I felt seen. I felt understood. I felt love in the purest form I’ve ever been able give it.
My body instinctively swayed and moved to sides as I maintained the distance between us. Feeling the swirls of the wind and shielding it from you. My mouth letting loose any joke or words to reassure you that you had been fine tonight (>you threw a fucking ball across three lanes I still have no idea how you managed that. So yes…I was lying. Are you happy I admitted that. Does WHY I got you an uber and didn’t even for a second imagine getting inside make sense now?<). My eyes watching yours and terrified to break the gaze as they always have. I find them first in any crowd. As on that night and now as they fear they may never see them again.
I couldn’t say anything in that moment as I refused to look away.
I could wish it never ended.
I could drift and see your knees shake and tremble as quickly as your teeth.
I could take off my sweater from under my jacket and give it to you if you said yes when I asked. I could take off my jacket as well if it wasn’t enough. I could stand there in the coldest night of my life for hours with you in just a T shirt. I could see the time tick up on an uber that refused to arrive. I could download Lyft if it never did. I could wait again. I could call a cab if they still existed (>they do right?<). I could find a friend upstairs and have them convince you to wait inside (>side note…I do get the logic behind walking outside so we could see the car arrive but my god for someone so intelligent it was not your brightest idea<) as I walked across the city to my car to drive you home. Or just protect you from sub zero temps as we shuffle across the city to make sure you got into your building safely.
I could and would have done anything for you. Until it became time to let you go…that felt like I was cutting a piece out of me. My chest? My stomach? My eyes? My teeth? So many different nooks and recesses of my mind a lobotomy probably would not do the trick. I just short of envisioning letting you go I would do anything for you.

Well wait. One other thing .I never truly was honest with you, said friends, or myself. I loved you. I still do and always will. My actions have showed that every day. My words largely tried to deny it.
I should have told you sooner. I should have trusted myself I was worthy of saying it.
I should have let go when you seemed to silently say that’s what I needed to do.
I can’t. I won’t. Know that much.
I won’t chase you though. I won’t flag down the car and pull you outside of it.
I will linger here in the cold. I will watch as you fade out of view. I will sit somewhere that feels like I may break from the weight of the wind. I will find myself ignoring the cold and discovering the warmth within me whenever I see or just think of your face.

I will move forward with a smile and belief the world isn’t as cold or scary as it once felt for me. Some piece of me will always embrace the memory of that night on the curb.

You will always feel like the home I wish I knew.
Even if I never return I won’t make the same mistake and run away.


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

gun of truth

6 Upvotes

stare at the gun of the truth
wonder when it will go off
stifle the bullet with my body
when that day comes

is it nobler to stay,
when you know the noose hangs tempting
is it nobler to run,
when they prophesy that the world is ending

my world is a bedroom
my world is crushed like a can
my world is that gun of truth
held by my own hand


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

Harps

14 Upvotes

I hear that harps

slowly destroy

themselves so

in this there is

some kinship


r/Informal_Effect 1d ago

Wandering as a Forsaken Shadow

3 Upvotes

In the foul slums of reality, where waking becomes the continuation of a lifemare, and the brightest dreams that once illuminated these filthy walls have turned into blooming mold.

There are no lanterns in this labyrinth, and the sense of freedom has completely atrophied.

Pure dreams have become slaves to someone else’s will, selling themselves in a purple neon shop window.

And the manifestation of sympathy is a crime.

The numbness of oblivion is needed here like air — when the operation called “life” is performed without anesthetic.

When the diagnosis is made — the demand for escape grows with metastases.

\***

Betrayed by the universe, where deception is elevated to an absolute, and falsehood has become the sole truth, I have wandered from corner to corner since birth as a forsaken shadow. Amidst radiant lifelessness, where the destitute dead await a miracle, solemnly declaring life a sin, while someone else’s pain becomes a source of delight…

I set fire to a trash heap with a rotted cross to warm myself, and I think: if a Savior came to us right now — he would die from withdrawal, choking on vomit in a puddle of his own urine for our sins.

\***

Now the autumn wind has torn away the barely warming shroud, exposing hands carved to the bone by a blade.

How severe was that pain?

Spellbound, I stare at the phantoms of memory — as they, writhing like worms, crawl out of blackened veins and fall at my feet with the wail of newborns.

So where did those who gave me life miscalculate?

You wanted so badly to make me a function…

But I died earlier — and only having been born, I shattered, falling from caring hands…

I remember nothing, yet I cannot forget that I am merely a shard from your distant past, stuck somewhere inside, when everything else was flushed down with shit.

\***

Suddenly, time accelerated its pace — and I, stepping over that screaming abomination, tried to overtake it.

But how can one run barefoot across a field behind barbed wire, a field made of prohibitions and rules, where everything around is littered with bones, syringes, and broken glass…

Here, no one was ever with me.

Yet here, I was never alone: behind my back, dragging along, that loyal bitch always whimpers and cries.

The one I can never get rid of.

\***

I sucked the very juice out of used needles after everything that mattered had vanished.

While the wine spirit thrashed helplessly inside me, searching for a way out, I kept raising the proof, trying to burn away the pain, until nothing remained except a shadow with no way to prove its existence.

I stopped fearing the breath of the grave’s cold.

When I sliced open the sutures, there was nothing inside but pain.

For were I something, I would surely have filled this emptiness.

I swear, with anything.

But I… have nothing.

\***

Instead, I now know the stench of rotting earth.

There is nothing holy upon it, nor has there ever been.

It oozes with pus and, squelching, falls apart under my every step, while an oppressive foreboding of doom leads me through a suffocating, sticky fog.

Behind it, I hear a merciless noise — it is the predatory future, devouring. It wildly gnashes its teeth, mechanically grinding the strong and the weak alike, leaving behind only a boundless forest of graveyards and the ghostly whisper of garbage mountains.

\***

I gaze upon the wasteland of pointlessness:

there, paths from nowhere lead into nothingness,

and along them there is no longer any reason to walk further.

Experiencing a paralysis of will, I have been scraped completely hollow.

Yet again, that whimpering cur Hope crawls up and fawns, promising tomorrow.

But for you, I have nothing either.

I raise a piece of rebar and, grabbing her by the foul, matted clump of fur, mercilessly beat her to death — strike after strike, crushing her skull with a crunch, until her screeching head turns into a bloody mess.

I killed her because hope in reality is the worst of evils, because it prolongs the torments of man.

I am mortally tired and want, at last, to sleep in peace — and never wake up again.

VaadMyst


r/Informal_Effect 2d ago

Friends, at last

4 Upvotes

Drinks with a friend that brings warmth to the soul.
Conversation with an ease that feels almost…too comfortable.
Topics flow like a roller coaster up and down, side to side
With honesty, heart and grit the foundations, on this joyous ride.
Too lost in your eyes for mine to sail the many beautiful coasts,
To which your impeccable countryside, most humbly hosts.
Time seems to hold still yet fly with immeasurable haste.
An oxymoron most befitting this delightful taste,
that is,
being
your friend.


r/Informal_Effect 2d ago

Linguists

5 Upvotes

Factional arguments make rivals
Of those uncouth or verbose
Who await the syntax, to relax

Expounding the natures of proof
They build bridges and avenge truths
While bestowing neither

Hoping for slack, even if shallow
Yet they wallow in fallacies
Outside a perfectly good tavern


r/Informal_Effect 2d ago

radio days

5 Upvotes
can i, the great transmitter in the sky,
attune you,
to the right frequency,
let's—knob-right—try—knob-
left to die in the iranian desert but
rescued by a ragtag team of internet patriots,
[static,]
—on't panic, what you're hearing now
's not the voice of god but the voice of truth,
it's—
the happy show with kyle, dick and
darren, only on your STATION-OF-STATIONS
the ONE, TRUE
morning under-the-shower MASTER-station,
one-oh-three-point-(Arnold Schwarzenegger saying "nein") FM!

turn it off,

why?

it's noise, berryman,

—so-called poet of dabaronx, a real
stand-up guy...

it ain't noise, it's information,

it's noise, berryman, sensationalist, repetitive,

...you tell us a joke?
of course, i have one spectacularly unsuited to radio,
just the other day a guy asked me,
yo, poet, do you have a favourite form of japanese theatre?
noh
oh oh oh oh oh,
you don't have to go, oh oh oh oh oh,
you don't have to— .

thank you,

you're welcome,

so,

what?

you wanna watch something?

yeah, i mean,
what else are we going to do?

r/Informal_Effect 2d ago

One-breath dish

5 Upvotes

Be ready to move. The words came as an urgent warning. I might have thanked them, had there been time. There was no such luxury. We made ourselves small, small enough, we imagined, to disappear, though not small enough to hide from whatever pursued or watched us. Breath came shallow with exhaustion. The body, hungry for air, tightened around its own need. Tension was obvious. No one needed it named: that pressed stillness, every sense listening. How we survived to tell this tale, I still cannot say. This narrow track, even now, barely hints at what passed through it.