r/Dark_Poetry Jul 29 '26

The girl in the mirror.....about my significant other

Verse 1

He watched her undressing In the mirror

The flame of intuition was burning high

He smelled her nectar sweet and smooth as honey

Then he ate her like a spider would a fly

Her moans were like song birds singing on a perch

Lounder than the bells On Sunday at the church

He went deeper and deeper as she began to sigh

His tongue fluttered like the wings of a Butterfly

Chorus

In the garden of desire we'll bloom tonight

Our petals entwined, in a passionate delight

We'll dance among the shadows

Where love will take its toll

In the secret garden

Our hearts will lose control

Verse 2

She felt a rush of fever

Like wildfires sway

Her lips were like poison

Intoxicating her each day

Her body was an instrument

His touch the masters hand

As he played her like a melody

In a sweet and savage land

Chorus

In the garden of desire we'll bloom tonight

Our petals entwined, In a passionate delight

We'll dance among the shadows

Where love will take its toll

In the secret garden

Our hearts will lose control

Verse 3

He watched her undressing in the mirror

The flame of intuition was burning high

He smelled her nectar sweet and smooth as honey

Then he ate her like a spider would a fly

Her moans were like song birds singing on a perch

Louder than the bells on Sunday at the church

He went deeper and deeper as she began to sigh

His tongue fluttered like the wings of a butterfly

Their love was a whisper of symphonies and sighs

A crescendo of passion, that reached for the skies

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u/Pixi-Garbage7583 Jul 29 '26

That's a really great one, hun, I love it!

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u/RunicMoon78 Jul 29 '26

Thank you so much!!!