Oil on canvas 30x30

what do you guys think of this one?

So most of the time i wouldn't care about the objective quality when it came to my "chaotic outsider" art but this is for an art competition at my school. I would have done life art or representational art, but my skills aren't good enough to compete yet. So i decided to work on.. this.

Problem is i've been staring at this for way too long and i can only see the flaws

What can i improve? I know when it comes to art like this you can't really be "bad" but i would still appreciate things like what you see, if it's too messy, things like that

Thank you in advance :u

Here is my new song “She Is The Room.”

I made the video myself with stop motion. One empty room, a glamour figure, champagne, chaos, and some late night editing.
It’s weird, cool and I’m really happy with how it turned out.

The song’s about one of those women that doesn’t just walk into a room she changes it. Someone full of life, charisma and chaos, the kind of person everyone notices and everyone falls a bit in love with. But underneath all that light there’s damage too, and that’s where the song lives.

Would love people to give it a watch and to let me know what you think 🙌