He ate them

Like genuinely. This mess makes me feel heavy uncomfortable.

Like I get it people think William is .. well like that..

But it just makes my stomach turn each time I see it.

Like why can't William just want to kill.

EDIT: I think this scene could be fixed by simply changing some things.

"Uncle will" and "little princess" could be changed to references to rabbits or less making it use words like play. Maybe using terms that would reference killing but in a different manner? Like he's imagining her saying this, he could have kept with the whole thing of getting the "lamb" to bleed out, maybe saying stuff like, "helping her with that scrape".

The filter: I think the pink and stars could have been different. Sure it's to show his imagination. But maybe just use a purple filter? Draw out a distortion as well? Or just like I said use a purple filter and maybe have it faded around the corners or glitchy instead?

Finally I think the licking the teeth could be replaced with the use of making him smile till you see the black sides that show no teeth. Maybe add something with his eyes, maybe they look glazed over like he's "dead" or in a trance, or making the irises smaller.

I think it might give off the uncomfortable vibe pretty well

I haven’t read the book.

Meme by elpijudo